The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting.
04/13/07
Intriguing title and surprising main character! I'd like to know, though, is the dead body in her car a REAL dead person or just a "dummy"? That is the mystery here to me! :)
04/14/07
Dum-dum,dum dum! goes the music. Mystery unsolved but nevertheless a mystery! Neat job of creative thinking....and brief! I liked it!
04/14/07
Cute! Angela Lansbury, a murderer? Hmmm. I guess we'll never know, unless you write the sequel for us! :)
04/16/07
Good writing, but I would have liked for it be a little longer.
04/17/07
Oh, was she dreaming or did it all really happen? Mysterious for sure! I can see this expanding into novel material-keep up the good writing!
04/17/07
I would have loved this expanded, more descriptions and action, but what a great concept!