The Official Writing Challenge
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What a fun read---far-fetched, perhaps, but it's a mystery so I think it's allowed :) Anyway, you got my attention and I enjoyed it.
Very creative. I like the ending, too. Good job.
This needs more than 750 words to fill in the details and stretch out the timeline a little more. But it sure is a great story.
Interesting story right on target, Topic-Wise, Title, Suspense and creativity. However, not being a Reader or Writer of's difficult to comment or critique masterfully. But I thought it quite good, despite my minimal knowledge.
Great story! Interesting to the very end!
Very good! I couldn't see anything to suggest for improvement. A captivating mystery and a great ending.
Great story. Good mystery with a happy ending. Good writing.
I like this mystery! It reminds me of something the boxcar children might find, but solved in a Nancy drew fashion! Very good ending, I'm glad they were able to bring 'justice' at least to her name in the end. ^_^
What a great ending, a really nice mystery.