The Official Writing Challenge
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04/13/07
A murder story told mostly in the voice of the victim--what a clever device!
Excellent job switching POV effectively, and within 750 words. Impressive.

Great, great story.
04/13/07
Shades of Shakespeare - I could also hear the bard himself. Well done.
An age-old story told in a most creative way!
Poignant! Very well written. Good account of this Bible story.
04/17/07
I never quite saw Jezebel in this light before-though it is certainly most fitting! You brought her to life and gave a new twist to an old story without changing the true meaning. Excellent job and a good mystery!
04/17/07
I like the POV you used to tell this mystery, good job.
04/17/07
How creative, and chilling!!! Very well done. VERY!