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03/15/07
I wondered if anyone would write about this! This was done perfectly! I throughly enjoyed this take and it was the perfect genre. What I liked is that it inspired me to read it a second time after knowing who it was about - I loved this!
When I realized who was talking I wanted to start over and read it again as well. This is exceptional!
03/17/07
I liked this. I've not heard anyone take on Saul's perspective before. You did a good job of showing his torment.
03/20/07
This is a masterpiece--great use of alliteration and repetition, and you absolutely expressed the hatred and jealousy in Saul's soul--and in so few, perfectly chosen words.
What a creative POV for music! You certainly had the "voice" for Saul. Excellent poem!
Oh, wow! I just got it after having read it once before and being puzzled. I just had my 'Well, duh!' moment! LOL (I know, call me slow, you're absolutely right. ; ) This is really wonderful! You captured Saul's soul perfectly in this skillful and oh so creatively written poem, Mel. Bravo!!
03/21/07
So very powerful. Excellent in every way.
03/21/07
Oooh, Masterful! I have to love this. It's so different and kind of haunting at the same time. The POV is great and I especially like the emotions it draws on. Awesome writing! ^_^
03/21/07
This is Masters work for sure! Wonderful POV, gripping emotions. I especially loved the stanza about jangle and jars.
03/22/07
Very nice and very original. I enjoyed this and the poem flowed beautifully. Thanks for sharing it
Congratulations on the lyrical message of this poem and your EC Placement.