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This reminds me of Frank Peretti's earlier work. I thought this was well done, what a battle it truly is to praise Him. You captured that well.
Excellent portrayal of the spirit world - I agree with Julie - this does remind me of early Peretti. Great job!
Wonderful story on the power of forgiveness. Forgiveness is a healing balm to the soul. Good job.
This was a very good story reminding us of the battle going on today in the spirit world around us.
Great message in this story that reminds us a battle for our minds and souls is going on each day between the darkness and the Light! Thank you for reminding us to be aware of this and to stay focused on God our Deliverer.
Oooh! I like this. Great look at the struggle between the real and 'supernatural'. I especially liked reading from this POV and I'm so glad that Faith finally returned to the arms of her Heavenly Father. Great writing! ^_^
What a wonderful reminder that forgiveness is truly for us, and not the ones we are forgiving. This is well-written. Kudos.