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03/16/07
I liked this! Too often stories like this end on a sad note because usually they make the wrong choice. This was a realistic situation many people I love faced. You captured it well. Good job!
03/19/07
Very intriguing story! I enjoyed seeing how important Tonia's passion was to her. Keep writing!
Make sure of your pemanent relationships. Glad to see this first romance did not gel. After commitment, there may have been a lifetime of regret. Wait for the right partner.
03/21/07
I'm glad Tonia made the right choice and kept her music and dumped Fred. This could be a parable, or an article for a take-home paper. It's kind of short and easy to read at the same time. Thanks for sharing! ^_^