The Official Writing Challenge
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03/15/07
Such beautiful memories, and written so well that I could feel the breeze through the trees, hear the wind chimes and see the hear the little Chickadee. Nicely done.
Your writing reminded me of not only mermory's music, but music's ability to heal as well - thank-you.
03/16/07
What a strong beginning, and it stayed strong all the way through. Great descriptions and emotion. Good job!
03/17/07
This one reminds me of a friend who lost her husband unexpectedly. It's a lovely acknowledgment of the stages that loss takes us through. Good job.
Sad but, somehow, peaceful story. Memories are part of life. We need them to survive. I could see the scene - come spring.