The Official Writing Challenge
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03/16/07
Great descriptions and dialogue, especially liked Dr. Sara's first remarks to Lindsay. Very nice job!
03/19/07
I loved, especially, the interaction between the MC and Ms. Sara. Wonderful.
03/21/07
I really liked the character of Dr.Sara. Even with her 'brief' appearance, she quickly became my favorite. I liked the dialouge between Lindsay and Mrs. Bishop. You did a great job with this piece. ^_^
04/15/07
What a beautiful story! You capture the character of musicians to share with your readers.