The Official Writing Challenge
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A moving story showing the magic of music.
03/15/07
Moving message here. I especially loved the ending, with the description of the brother and sister "crashing" to the feet of their startled mother after bringing their sister's music back into the house.

Would like to see more dialogue and descriptive actions of this type opening the story and/or introduced into it earlier on.

Great title--both its alliteration and use of a personal name drew me in right away!
This is a touching story. The power of music is amazing. You kept my attention all the way through.
03/16/07
This flowed so well, a touching moving story. Used the theme well here. Excellent!
03/16/07
The ending made me teary.
05/18/07
This touched me on so many levels. The ending had me reaching for a tissue. You have an amazing gift from God...keep writing for Him!