The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved the line "in all I shall see HIM!" May we see HIM today!
04/25/05
This is a wonderfully poetic piece! You appear to have worked really hard to find the right word or phrase. (silently walking her thoughts to private wonderments. - Both radiate harmonic fulfillment) If you didn't then I want your gift! It pulsates with the love you have for your Heavenly Father, your beloved, your child and the family of God. Again I'm envious. Can I come to your church?
04/26/05
Wow! wow! This is really tighly woven. What word selection! And perfect rythm. Nice!