The Official Writing Challenge
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03/16/07
Hey, dude. That was real cool! I liked the whole tone of it and you kept up the voice well.
03/17/07
What a unique way to tell this familiar bible story! I caught on fairly early, but it only made it more delightful to see how you gave Paul such a fun and "modern" voice. Your title, too, is just perfect! Great stuff.
03/18/07
Every time I see the name Jail House Rock, I think of the song by Carmen! This was just as good. So witty, so cool, so ... so ... jail house rocky. I loved it and it's one of my favorites this week. Hope it places for you.
03/19/07
Excellent! Very well written, amusing, and a great message! I really liked the "updating" of this wonderful Bible story!
03/19/07
I enjoyed this. I wondered if Paul ever thought of the "Joseph syndrome."
03/19/07
It's so tricky to mix "modern" elements with familiar Bible stories--this could be hald up as an example of the way to do it right! Really delightful.
03/20/07
Great approach and message. Really enjoyed reading your piece. Thanks.