The Official Writing Challenge
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03/16/07
What a lovely story. I could just feel the child's love for music and the panic over the decree. A great way to use the theme. Well done!
You're a great storyteller. I bet this would be even better told out loud - with sound effects! Thanks.
Wonderful "fairy tale" type story here. I could hear the birds singing and even imagine the beautiful voice of the king's daughter.
Too beautiful for words! Loved the story and the message it conveys.
03/21/07
I wish there had been more! I wanted to keep reading more and more of this fairy-tale. I loved the Princess and felt quite sorry for the King. This would make a good Children's story. ^_^