The Official Writing Challenge
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Great title for a neat entry that shows us life as it really is - and with such descriptive phrases. Great way to decipher Music! Very Good!
Well done. What a beautiful and sensitive way you have with words.
You introduced your characters beautifully from the beginning dialogue. This is so well written--packed with wonderful verbs and great descriptions: “His frown-lines flip into a dozen glowing smiles.” “...gnarled finger…” “…moon-shaped face.” “…with its pumpkin-colored M’s and purple sixes…” The message was wonderfully illustrated through your unique and gifted characters.
Great characters and I loved the repeat of music binding together. Good job!
What a wonderful story about music binding us together. No matter what physical or mental disabilities, every person created by God has something important to add to our lives.

In Jesus' Name,