The Official Writing Challenge
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03/15/07
Great title for a neat entry that shows us life as it really is - and with such descriptive phrases. Great way to decipher Music! Very Good!
03/15/07
Well done. What a beautiful and sensitive way you have with words.
03/16/07
You introduced your characters beautifully from the beginning dialogue. This is so well written--packed with wonderful verbs and great descriptions: “His frown-lines flip into a dozen glowing smiles.” “...gnarled finger…” “…moon-shaped face.” “…with its pumpkin-colored M’s and purple sixes…” The message was wonderfully illustrated through your unique and gifted characters.
03/16/07
Great characters and I loved the repeat of music binding together. Good job!
What a wonderful story about music binding us together. No matter what physical or mental disabilities, every person created by God has something important to add to our lives.

In Jesus' Name,

Patricia