The Official Writing Challenge
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Really liked your dialogue and the wit you brought out in the ladies - it all seemed so real. Sounds like a fun bunch to hang out with - shopping or not.
Wonderful inspirational message, very strong characters and the best dialogue I have read.
Yes - you made these characters come alive for me! I felt like I was watching a movies as I could picture them so well. My only suggestion would be to drop the last word - as the rest already implies they were excited:) Good writing!!
Super interaction! Loved each and every character. You do a wonderful job with dialogue.
I agree with all the comments about dialogue, fun, nicely written, and characters...but asking Miss Harper to join them is a bit unbelievable; after all- she is the boss lady in charge...but otherwise enjoyable read.
Wonderful Sunday School lesson from the hen house. HeHe. Good writing and I enjoyed this banter.