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I enjoyed this story. It was both sad and sweet. I was touched that Alice would do a little shopping each day on her limited income. I especially liked how Rajha listened carefully for God to answer her prayers.
What a great title for a great piece. I like the weaving together of the two thought patterns. Good job!
Your title drew me! And I wasn't disapointed. It was a compelling story. Well written and meaniful to the reader.
Sweet story with a good message about allowing God to lead us in our daily contacts with others.
Great witnessing story. I would to God that we could all slow our pace of life to include seeking God for the needs of others. Good job.
Wonderful job....... The author told the story skillfully. Also, thanks to your character, Rajha for doing what all of us should do....but don't. Thanks for reminding me. There are SO MANY lonely people out there.