The Official Writing Challenge
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Great story telling. You had my attention from the start. The romantic in me was hoping.....Thank you for sharing!
Very intriguing story. Wonderful account of squatter days. Kept me all the way through. Good writing.
03/13/07
Great story! You really kept the interest going.
03/14/07
Lovely description - I was right there with you. I absolutely LOVE your last sentence especially.
03/15/07
I liked this. I liked the tone of the entire story and the end just made it come together wonderfully. Good job.