The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/07
Great story telling. You had my attention from the start. The romantic in me was hoping.....Thank you for sharing!
03/12/07
Very intriguing story. Wonderful account of squatter days. Kept me all the way through. Good writing.
03/13/07
Great story! You really kept the interest going.
03/14/07
Lovely description - I was right there with you. I absolutely LOVE your last sentence especially.
03/15/07
I liked this. I liked the tone of the entire story and the end just made it come together wonderfully. Good job.