The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/07
A very unique entry on shopping - and written extremely well...with many a truth to ponder. nice job.
03/08/07
I really enjoyed this story!I could identify with the narrator's "embarrassing moment" since I've always made mistakes like that too.

I'd like to see some dialogue thrown in to make the grocery store scene come even more alive.

Great message. The clever title, with its twist on the words "write" and "right," grabbed me right away!
A good example of how we go about our day without paying attention. Thanks to Jesus, we don't have to let it happen in our spiritual walk. Good story.
03/13/07
An important message for us writers! Now, stick with your own shopping cart from now on. LOL Blessings, Jo