The Official Writing Challenge
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"This poem about shopping
is more than just "WOW!"
It could get an ovation
from even 'ole Simon Cowell."

I'm willing to bet on it! Truly a great poetic masterpiece about Truth. Kudos.
Yes, I echo the Wow! This is right on target and uses a very familiar image, shopping, to get across a deep, deep spiritual truth. Great writing!
Put in this descriptive way - where else could we ever want to shop? Good job.
Excellent poem--excellent message!
Well-written, clever poem! Great message, too! :)
Interesting take on shopping. Good poem.
Very creative poem. I liked the sepeartion fo evil and truth by your use of different type.
Oh, very good. It reminded me a bit of the book "The Screwtape Letters" by C.S. Lewis.
Clever, creative and one of my top five this week!! Great entry!!
Wow! This was great! I loved the message, the format - just everything! Kudos girl! ;)