The Official Writing Challenge
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03/03/07
I love the sentiment in this story. A full line of space between paragraphs makes things much easier on the reader. Also, this felt a bit short. I would expand this and add more details, or tell of one thing she made you in great detail. Make it more of a story than an essay. Good job overall. Keep writing.
03/04/07
This was nice, sewing really is a love language. I agree with the above comments, this has a strong start, I'd love to see more. Keep up the nice work!
What a great sewing lesson. Learning to love.