The Official Writing Challenge
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A stitch in time. Beautiful!
Hooray! What an enjoyable read. Great job!
Loved it!
I enjoyed the progression of time connected by the "unbroken thread" of the woman's stitches in this delightful poem! The ending stanza was so perfect! :)
This is a GEM! I LOVED it! Just LOVED it.
I don't read poetry much but this was very enjoyable. Good job!
Absolutely wonderful! The unbreakable string of love ties throughout eternity.
I really loved this. The transition flows so well. "I snip the ties with misty eyes and free her borrowed heart..." Wow, that's beautiful! So sweet and touching. Excellent!
Beautiful poem. The way it progresses through time in the most unobstrusive way and love just flows through each stanza. Eloquently done.
This is really sweet. I like the story and especially the stanza with Grandma. Congrats on your win! ^_^
I'm very late, but want to tell you how much I enjoyed this. Congrats on your win, too.
Very well written. I can relate. Congratulations on winning the week.
Congratulations on this win. It's absolutely wonderful!
You must have had alot of fun writing this. Especially the final stanza. It made me laugh. Well done and congradulations.