The Official Writing Challenge
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A stitch in time. Beautiful!
03/02/07
Hooray! What an enjoyable read. Great job!
03/02/07
Loved it!
03/02/07
I enjoyed the progression of time connected by the "unbroken thread" of the woman's stitches in this delightful poem! The ending stanza was so perfect! :)
03/03/07
This is a GEM! I LOVED it! Just LOVED it.
I don't read poetry much but this was very enjoyable. Good job!
03/04/07
Absolutely wonderful! The unbreakable string of love ties throughout eternity.
03/07/07
I really loved this. The transition flows so well. "I snip the ties with misty eyes and free her borrowed heart..." Wow, that's beautiful! So sweet and touching. Excellent!
03/08/07
Beautiful poem. The way it progresses through time in the most unobstrusive way and love just flows through each stanza. Eloquently done.
03/08/07
This is really sweet. I like the story and especially the stanza with Grandma. Congrats on your win! ^_^
I'm very late, but want to tell you how much I enjoyed this. Congrats on your win, too.
Very well written. I can relate. Congratulations on winning the week.
Congratulations on this win. It's absolutely wonderful!
03/10/07
You must have had alot of fun writing this. Especially the final stanza. It made me laugh. Well done and congradulations.