The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved the thoughtfulness of the daughter to make HER day special for her mother too. I enjoyed it from beginning to the end.
03/04/07
What a great story, a labor of love. Nicely done!
03/05/07
I loved the buildup and I loved the sweetness to the story. Your dialogue was good too!
What a wonderful mother/daughter story. Love to read about surprises, especially when they're special. Good story.
03/07/07
I am totally impressed by what a great seamstress Tricia must have been. The dialogue flowed very nicely. I hope it's true too -- it's so sweet.
03/08/07
Just delightful telling. I wish you'd lingered a bit longer on mom's reaction, but that may have just been me. Lovely story.