The Official Writing Challenge
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A wonderful ending for this story!
03/04/07
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Wonderful weaving of the topic, life and lessons. I LOVED the voice ... and I LOVED how everything worked together in this. Any names? ;)
03/04/07
I especially loved the line "I'm ready too." This was an emotional piece I enjoyed very much!
A very good story. I did have trouble at times deciding who was speaking. But this was a very good example of how God walks us through our trials. And how he doesn't always change the trial, but often changes our heart instead.
03/07/07
Heartwarming and sweet! Nice job. :) Blessings, Jo
03/07/07
A heart-touching story. I really liked the way you conveyed the differnce between your feelings and the comfort you gave your daughter. Congrats on being a grandma. (Is this her actual due date?)
03/07/07
Just lovely, Terri, as always. I felt like I was right there.
03/07/07
Lovely story. Well written, emotional, and captivating. Woven together with lots of love . . . I can tell.
I was a little confused on the tag lines as to whom was speaking, but other than that your ability to evoke emotions through your writing shined through.
03/07/07
This reminded me of my first pregnancy. I wasn't ready to be a mom -- and my mom wasn't ready to be a grandma. This was really nicely done.
03/07/07
This gave me goose bumps. Loved the ending. Very nicely done.
03/08/07
So very sweet and touching! My little grandson is due in three months and I want to show this to my daughter. Thanks for sharing it