The Official Writing Challenge
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03/03/07
Even though endings can be good things, I really wish she had tried to work it out with her friend. This was definitely thought provoking. To be honest, I had to cringe at the very end. You story was clear enough that the readers could find the moral for themselves. Don't tell us he moral, let us figure it out ourselves. :) This piece has potential. Keep writing.
03/04/07
This was an interesting story. The title definitely was appropriate with the ending. Keep writing!
03/05/07
Good pov here. Wrapped up in an interesting story.