The Official Writing Challenge
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Your allegory is thought-provoking and yet so simple! I love the last line.
03/04/07
This was excellent! I too loved that last line.
I get it! What a wonderful story about the bride of Christ. What a surprise ending. Great story.
03/08/07
Cindy, this is my favorite yet of yours! Beautiful!
Wow! Well done, Cindy. I loved the rythym and pattern of the layout, the glimpses into the bride and groom's perspectives, the persistance of the "Sew-er"...
The last line was a perfect finish to such a creative take on the topic.
I am reminded about the extravagance of God's love and grace for each of us as His Bride. (Reminds me, also, of Francine River's "Redeeming Love").
Thanks for obediently using your gift of pen. It has led me in worship and thanksgiving this morning.