The Official Writing Challenge
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What a clever story for this topic! I really enjoyed it.
03/05/07
Oh, but you have a clever mind! Well done.
03/06/07
So, SO clever and fun! Great commentary and descripion. And with a lesson to boot!
This is a hoot. It's fun and fresh, and cleverly written. Thumbs up.
03/06/07
Hilarious, and I love your little epilog. First-rate!
03/06/07
What an entertaining piece - a huge dose of fun! Blessings, Jo
03/06/07
Hehe This was great. I especially like the ending with the trumpet and it getting dark.
03/06/07
This was short, well named, and a very creative turn. So innovative. I love how you tied it all together, having people putting on tunics and it darkening for the show that was about to begin. Just a very well done, imaginative story! Can you say CREATIVE???
03/07/07
Very cute and enjoyable story. I love your descriptions. Joan Rivers would have a cow! Thanks for sharing this
03/07/07
Amazing creativity, fresh dialogue, this was a fun one beginning to end, great message too!