The Official Writing Challenge
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03/02/07
Loved your title and your descriptive and funny first paragraph! I also enjoyed the discussion of this challenging Bible passage. Good job! :)
03/04/07
You did a great job with the characters as I could envision the boy with the frustrating thread and needle. Great work!
Great father and son parley. I also liked the fact that the father encouraged the son to decide for himself.