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Oh so very sad, but tender, too. Wonderful detail.
The ending made me teary. I also liked the accent/dialect.
A very touching story here. One of life's most difficult moments, for sure. Who can understand a life extinguished before it begins? It's one of the great mysteries that is on my list to ask Jesus...but, somehow, when I step into that land that's fairer than day...I think I'll know. Until then...thanks for capturing this mystery in such a moving way.
How wonderfully sad. I have never lost a child or grandchild. I'm sure it must be a painful experience. Beautiful story of love.
Such a moving story and so beautifully told.
Beautiful writing, and a bittersweet and lovely story, written with serenity.
What a touching story beautifully told!
This is very sweet, but sad, too. Love just the hint of dialect you used. You did an excellent job of drawing me in.
So lovely and bittersweet and moving.
Beautifully written. This piece reaches the heart.
You know it's good when you finish reading and have a lump in your throat. The accent, the dialogue, the loss, all wonderfully expressed.
Oh my goodness, how wonderfully touching. I cried but ended with a smile. Lovely and heartwarming. Thanks for sharing it
That was so very touching...... The dialect was well done too. Congratulations on your well-deserved success with this piece.