The Official Writing Challenge
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03/03/07
Oh my, this is delightful! I love stories from unique points of view like this. I also loved how you wove (haha) the lesson into the piece so well. Great job.
03/05/07
Flash must be related to most of the needles I've used through the years! Great story. Great pov about team work. We need one another.
03/06/07
Fun idea. I esp. liked the discourse regarding the thread coming towards his eye. Good job.
03/07/07
This was a really cute story!
03/08/07
This was well-written. I was so caught up in the story and my imagination was stirred. I liked how you brought out life lessons like cooperation and patience.
03/08/07
Congratulations on your win. This was a delightful piece, so creative and well done. Loved it!