The Official Writing Challenge
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03/03/07
Oh my, this is delightful! I love stories from unique points of view like this. I also loved how you wove (haha) the lesson into the piece so well. Great job.
Flash must be related to most of the needles I've used through the years! Great story. Great pov about team work. We need one another.
03/06/07
Fun idea. I esp. liked the discourse regarding the thread coming towards his eye. Good job.
03/07/07
This was a really cute story!
03/08/07
This was well-written. I was so caught up in the story and my imagination was stirred. I liked how you brought out life lessons like cooperation and patience.
Congratulations on your win. This was a delightful piece, so creative and well done. Loved it!