The Official Writing Challenge
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03/02/07
tying the earth & sky together is a nice theme for this story. Well done.
Loved to hear the two cygnets learning about life. I was splashing with them as they explored the new experience.
03/06/07
I liked the tidbits of wisdom from both grandpa and grandma and the fact of man reaching up and God reaching down. Very enjoyable. Great job!
A cute story! I love the idea of God's pulling us close because he loves us.
03/06/07
I loved hearing about Tess and the cygnets again and this one is especially touching and well done. Thanks for sharing it
03/07/07
Hmmmm! I think you have the beginnings of a series of children's books here! I can visualize the lovely pictures illustrating the delightful (and insightful!!) stories of Tess and her cygnets! :D
03/07/07
What a neat analogy! I enjoyed this very much.
03/07/07
Pretty cool indeed! Great descriptions, lovely story!
03/08/07
Great to see Tess and her kids again in this piece. I liked the creative look at sewing the sky and the earth together. You had some great lines in here, especially the one from Grandpa about Man reaching up and God reaching down. Very well written!