The Official Writing Challenge
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Your story brought back memories. You crafted it perfectly, too.
03/02/07
Excellent. So well written - a mom that understood the "needs" of a teenage daughter. Descriptive and flows well. Kept me reading.
Good story. I sense a little bit of "growing up" here too.
03/07/07
This was so sweet! Very realistic and what a great mom!! It flowed and kept me interested with every line - a really good way to present a learning situation. Nice writing!