The Official Writing Challenge
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03/03/07
This was a very grippingly good story! I felt the secrecy, the mystery, the devotion and reverence involved in protecting this one piece of cloth. Great imagination and detail!
Pat Guy  
03/03/07
I loved the tender relationship that shows through your words - the ambience. Very good!
Pat Guy  
03/04/07
Sorry for the above comment - I got my pages mixed up! *embarrassed emoticon*

This was a very unique, Scifish fiction entry and I thourghly enjoyed the read.
Wouldn't have been interesting ... wow!

Really good work and well written - topnotch stuff!