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The beginning of this story caught my attention and I enjoyed it to the end. One change to make, a stallion is a male. Love the characters' personalities...very vivid.
I like the homespun feel of this piece. The dialogue is right on and believable. Well done.
03/03/07
This was a riviting story, from start to finish, with a great message. There are only a couple of errors to be corrected, grammatically speaking. You have a great imagination and talent for putting your reader into the story.
03/03/07
Also enjoyed the down-home charm of this piece. Lovely!
Heartwarming story. Mamas always understand. At least I hope they do.
03/09/07
This was really sweet. The part at the end with the horse giving birth on the new dress and the mother's response was especially touching. Well done.