The Official Writing Challenge
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Very clever! I liked the humor in this.
03/01/07
I loved this story! Delightful dialogue that really had me laughing! I could just see and hear that old couple--not unlike how my husband and I communicate sometimes already. Terrific job!
Cute story. Had me laughing. Felt like I was a mouse in the room.
03/05/07
This was really cute - great dialogue. It was easy to picture the two even without descriptions. This would make a great mini-play.
03/08/07
Loved it! Loved it! Loved it! Thought it exceptionally true to life, witty, brilliantly creative, and written very well. Thanks for sharing this gem with us...and Congratulations on placing!