The Official Writing Challenge
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02/26/07
Yes, commitment in anything is good. I'm glad you were able to come to grips with your dieting and weightloss.
02/27/07
Good words of wisdom - thanks. Nicely written with a solid point of view.
03/01/07
I really liked the intro to your story, although I would put a question mark after “both” and finish with “either or both.” It sounds like you have a healthy attitude about the body, and I’m impressed with your commitment to good health. Thanks for sharing.