The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/07
Good twist at the end. I was guessing where this was going, but the guess didn't quite make it. The ending was better than I expected. Great job. I love the comparisons with Ezekiel and Ahab's Chariot. Great writing! ^_^
This was an outstanding story. I love the comparisons to Bible characters. A meeting with God! Wonderful!