The Official Writing Challenge
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02/23/07
I enjoyed reading this story! I could relate to it, as I jog some mornings and have felt both ways at different times. (No tempting cafe on my running route, though!) There is an elderly man in our neigborhood who jogs as well--so I could just picture that character in the story. Great description and also message!
You make some good points here, with easy to follow, descriptive language. Way to go.
02/24/07
Oh, you used my favorite verse in this entry! (Is. 40:31) Don't forget to cite that verse, even if you're putting it into your own words. It does help to focus on the end, rather than the task at hand sometimes, doesn't it?
Enjoyable reading. Great pov.
02/24/07
Very well written and a great analogy. I really liked the encouraging older runner.
02/25/07
I LOVE this as an analogy! All your "characters" were so realistic, and this really hit home! Thanks for sharing!
02/25/07
Beautifully written allegory.
04/28/07
Beautiful analogy! I love the way we can look at life and gain insight and inspiration! Wonderfully written!