The Official Writing Challenge
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What a wonderful story! With a lovely twist at the end! If we could still vote, I would be clicking right now. I chuckled out loud.
Loved it, very creative. I'd be hitting the button too!
OH MY GOODNESS!!! What an ending!!!! I've got goosebumps and am reeling! Powerful punch! I only wish we had her phone number so she wouldn't eat all those chocolates!
I enjoyed the intrigue very much and hate to sound like a wet blanket (or duvet!), but I can't find much here to glorify God.
Way to go! I liked this. Very clever and well-written. I really think there should be more Challenge stories that explore the dark side of human nature, as this one does. Good job!
Outside the box, to be sure! Welcome to the neighborhood! lol! :-)
Interesting development of the story line. An unexpected ending.
This was GOOD writing! You definitely caught my attention!

Mary N