The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/05
What a wonderful story! With a lovely twist at the end! If we could still vote, I would be clicking right now. I chuckled out loud.
04/18/05
Loved it, very creative. I'd be hitting the button too!
OH MY GOODNESS!!! What an ending!!!! I've got goosebumps and am reeling! Powerful punch! I only wish we had her phone number so she wouldn't eat all those chocolates!
I enjoyed the intrigue very much and hate to sound like a wet blanket (or duvet!), but I can't find much here to glorify God.
04/19/05
Way to go! I liked this. Very clever and well-written. I really think there should be more Challenge stories that explore the dark side of human nature, as this one does. Good job!
04/20/05
Outside the box, to be sure! Welcome to the neighborhood! lol! :-)
04/21/05
Interesting development of the story line. An unexpected ending.
04/23/05
This was GOOD writing! You definitely caught my attention!

Mary N