The Official Writing Challenge
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02/23/07
I love the analogy here. Never thought of it quite that way before, which makes for great writing. Excellent!
02/24/07
Definitely a new perspective - and written so wonderfully and masterfully. Excellent!
02/24/07
Oh, this was great. The only thing I may have changed would be the title, because I didn't see much of an emphasis on praying. But that's really a moot point. I loved this.

Good meter and rhyme. I love the last line. It makes the whole poem. Very well done.
All of the above. I really enjoyed this poem. Good job.
Haha! Great job! Very creative.
02/25/07
This is wonderful! I especially liked the bit about Jesus's "serve." Clever, well-written, and with a great message.
02/25/07
This is very creative. I love the idea of finding the best athlete of all time and coming up with Christ. Great job.
Fantastic poem with a fantastic title. I cannot imagine being a judge and trying to pick the best of the best...Great job.
02/28/07
So cool! I never would've put Christ as a super-star athlete, but when looked at like this, He really was! :-) Wonderful take on MVP. :-)
02/28/07
LOVE this! This is great, really wonderful! The flow is so smooth and the story so true, even though I've never thought of it this way, a very creative angle. Thanks for sharing such wonderful writing! ^_^
02/28/07
Very clever, very original, extremely enjoyable! So glad I read this. Thanks for sharing it