The Official Writing Challenge
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Very good job at building that suspense here! Not sure how this will be rated for topic (since it is supposed to be a "handcraft" type of craft), but I was definitely engrossed and engaged from beginning to end!
Good writing. Enjoyed this story. Had a "real" sound to it.
I agree that this may not fit into the topic of Handcraft, but it sure is a very interesting and compelling read right up to the end.
This was like a piece out of a good book! - or a movie- nice writing. I like how you wove in the background so nicely:)