The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 581 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
02/17/07
Such a great message to us all; and given to us in story form like a parable. Sweet little story with a great message. Enjoyed this one.
02/18/07
Thanks for a new insight. I am God's crafty and He can do with me what He wants! Nice job of expressing something complex by a simple example!
02/18/07
A very pleasant read, how encouraging to know we are all His crafties!
I really liked this. Such a profound message in such a simple story. Good writing.
02/21/07
Good message - my thoughts would be to capitalize some of your Mom's and Grandma's where needed. Also it struck me odd that a boy who talked like he did - very childish - knew the word Resurrection - it didn't fit when I read it. Was there a switch in POV too? But I think it wouldn't take very much at all to make this a really good story! Again - great message!
This is actually a true story...it's about my grandson. I thought it was such a great story that I wanted to share it. And yes, a child can know the story of the resurrection. :)