The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/07
Great description. I liked how you did the flashbacks. Also liked your title.
02/16/07
Your title drew me in to read your story, and I like how the bell was used at the end to answer her question.
02/19/07
This is haunting - and your description is so very vivid and engaging. Perfect ending.
02/21/07
Good one! I love irony, and this story is rich with it.
02/21/07
This is so good! The descriptions live and the ending offers hope. Wonderful.
02/21/07
The bell ringing at the end was just perfect. Very haunting and well done.