The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/07
Mmm. This was sweet and sad yet filled with hope. A lovely entry.
02/16/07
Clear, crisp writing! Great job. Blessings, Jo
02/17/07
Very emotive. This story has a beautiful message.
02/18/07
As one who dabbles in so many crafts, needlecrafts, and art mediums, I loved this! (especially Grandma's hope to paint again, whether in this world or the next.) Great job!
02/18/07
Wonderful writing - I particularly loved the end. Great description.
02/18/07
Aw, it made me want to see all of those porcelain pieces. I love things like that. I, too, liked the ending.
02/21/07
Love your title, and your final two paragraphs. Quite lovely.
Pat Guy  
02/21/07
This is beautiful. Such delicate insights - and what a pleasing thought to know we will be able to do these things! So cool! Great writing.
02/21/07
I was so glad for the hope there at the end! As God's child we always have the hope of heaven. So good!!
02/21/07
I agree, those last paragraphs give such hope, and you described so well. The title was perfect.
02/24/07
Beautiful ... meaningful ... deep ... wow.