The Official Writing Challenge
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A lovely look into the day before it all began. Beautiful descriptions.
02/15/07
I loved imagining this simple scene with Jesus. I found myself longing for these pieces he made: just to rub it against my cheek, to feel the smooth wood he'd fashioned. Only one small idea: I don't think Jesus called his mother, "Mary." I think he called her "Mother."
I enjoyed this accounting of how it might have been. I guess we will always wonder about Jesus' early years. So little of it is revealed to us.
A good beginning, but it calls for more. I hope you add to this account of Jesus's early ministry. Writing about Him helps us to understand Him better I believe.
02/21/07
I always love it when Bible stories come alive through the gift of creative writing, and I thoroughly enjoyed this well-written, wonderfully descriptive account!