The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed the truth you shared here. Honest yet not threatening. Makes the reader think. My only suggestion would be a smoother transition into the closing.
02/12/07
I liked it. Simple, but with a strong message. I liked Grandpa's dialogue -- almost correct grammar, but not quite. Very nice.
02/12/07
Sweet story in a mini capsule. Nice going..
02/15/07
SUper job Clem. Congrats. God bless.