The Official Writing Challenge
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02/09/07
Absolutely delightful, precious, and told so beautifully and warmly. Loved the subtle finish; hmmm? I'm so glad it came out as it did - somehow I thought it was going to be another woman; perhaps I've known too many straying men. Thanks for bringing me to tears with this wonderful, Wonderful story. Kudos!
This was a good story. Loved the ending.
02/14/07
Such a cute story! I thoroughly enjoyed it. Very nicely done.
02/15/07
Lovely story, I couldn't figure out what was being hidden but it all made sense at the end. Well done.
02/18/07
EXCELLENT! I just loved it. I love surprise endings and the whole use of the Gone Fishing sign really played out well. It wasn't forced at all. Great job!!!!