The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/05
Wow! Good message and surprise ending. Very eye-opening.
Wow! That's will get a person thinking! Loved the progression! Loved the steps that you showed how his wife was feeling unloved! Great job!
04/23/05
Very cleverly done with a great build up to the climax. Loved the title too.
04/23/05
This has a real message to it. Makes us all think twice of where our priorities lie.
I really enjoyed this immensely, though I did figure out what was coming. Good read!
04/24/05
Good take away message.
04/25/05
Great story. Very well written.

Sadly, it is probably taking place several times a day in cities all over the U.S.

dave
04/25/05
Karen,

Great job!! A good reminder that we reap what we sow!

Blessings, Cheri
04/25/05
Congratulations on this huge win Karen! 1st place in both the Editor's Choice and Level 3 Champion Challenge! Well done. With love, Deb