The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/07
Boo hoo! This was great!It really pulled at strings:) Loved the emotion and the message within. And great last line.
02/09/07
You nailed it! Great story, great read and great message! Loved it from beginning to end; and yes, in the end I dropped a tear or two. Well done.
02/12/07
Very nice,and a good read, although quite poignant. How sad that he waited until retirement to go fishing for souls!
Liked this story. Good writing.