The Official Writing Challenge
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02/09/07
Neat story written with a bit of humor, which I enjoyed thoroughly. Command I believe was spelled Commend, but I loved the ride, the read and got the message loud and clear. Nicely done.
02/15/07
A cute story and a good message.
02/15/07
I hope that this is a true story - it is so very well done. Good lessons and oh so honest.