The Official Writing Challenge
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02/10/07
Great idea of Jesus' earlier years; I liked the story. The only part that got me confused, flustered, or whatever it is when you don't understand something...is the fish vomiting?? Oh well, I'm not fisherman; guess that's why I didn't understand. Nice job here.
02/10/07
Interesting thought on Jesus' early life. Nicely done and has a good flow.