The Official Writing Challenge
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02/10/07
Good ending - all six? That's a cool thought. Easy read, and enjoyable. Flows well. :)
02/12/07
Good title...interesting story. Kind of seemed like a lot for Carl to repeat all at one time though....^_^ Thanks for sharing.
02/14/07
Definitely a keeper! Excellent message and very well written.